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Re: Petal Fall -- My first poem
This is a very short but fulfilling poem. It can easily be translated into several meanings, whether social or emotional. Usually i am not a very big fan of poetry, ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: Empty
Well arnt you a little bundle of joy, lol. seriously i know what you mean. i think this poem is a fair reflection on how young people who are outcasts ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: My Suicide Note
hey um dude you kinda freak me out a bit. I know you have freedom of press if you are in the U. S. but seriously it is to close ...
Dec 24, 2007 -
Re: The dragons of Kytopan
I would say you have a great idea, but it needs alot of development. I sugest you make the character descriptions less like a list, and add more detail to ...
Dec 24, 2007
