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R. J. Hoffman

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Petal Fall -- My first poem

    This is a very short but fulfilling poem. It can easily be translated into several meanings, whether social or emotional. Usually i am not a very big fan of poetry, ...

    Dec 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Empty

    Well arnt you a little bundle of joy, lol. seriously i know what you mean. i think this poem is a fair reflection on how young people who are outcasts ...

    Dec 24, 2007
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Suicide Note

    hey um dude you kinda freak me out a bit. I know you have freedom of press if you are in the U. S. but seriously it is to close ...

    Dec 24, 2007
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The dragons of Kytopan

    I would say you have a great idea, but it needs alot of development. I sugest you make the character descriptions less like a list, and add more detail to ...

    Dec 24, 2007


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